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It's the Words You Didn't Say That Scream the Loud

I did it for you, I did it all for you

Just to save you

I did it for you

Would you believe me ever again?

The darkness consumed me

But I did it for you

Oh please believe me I did it all for you

I'll lay down this empire if it would bring you back

I'd give my life to hear your voice

I wish I could take it all back

But I did this for you

It's the words you didn't say that scream the loudest

Don't see the monster, can you still hear me?

I'm sorry baby, please forgive me

I'm not the hero you once knew

I would take it all back again if I knew that I would do this to you

Falling and still falling. If I reached hell will heaven still

Ahsoka's Forbidden Love Chapters 1-8

Chapter 1

Seventeen-year-old Ahsoka Tano watched the rain fall in her dark quarters of the
Jedi temple. Most of the time she loved the rain but that day it made her feel gloomy. Maybe she was wishing for snow in the holiday season, the decorations were up but no snow. The day of decorating Ahsoka felt the same gloom, but she got a good laugh seeing her Master Anakin Skywalker wearing a red fluffy Christmas hat and a bit of Creamy Smoothie on the tip of his nose from spraying Creamy Smoothie into his mouth. Anakin could be so comical sometimes; he was a Jedi like no other. Ahsoka appreciated her Master's training but at times when Ahsoka as

Ahsoka's Forbidden Love Chapter 13-*15*

Chapter 13

Ahsoka put her cloak over Padmé who shivered on the ship. "Thank you," Padmé sighed. Ahsoka nodded and sat down next to Padmé. "What did he say to you? I can feel that you are troubled." Ahsoka watched Padmé start to tremble again. "He sent them," Padmé explained. "He hired Boba to get close to you just so he could get information about whatever Anakin hid, he sent those Bounty Hunters, he sent them to kill Anakin! He . . . he gave horrid details." Ahsoka put an arm around Padmé; Ahsoka didn't know the details but could feel how awful they were and how much it could have hurt Padmé. "I'm sorry,"

Ahsoka's Forbidden Love Chapter 9-12

Chapter 9

Days past, it was the hardest time of Padmé's life. She couldn't leave or stay in the house without sobbing. The littlest things reminded her of her husband. Most things that would never have occurred to her of what Anakin would do occurred to her then. Even when told by her handmaidens she didn't go to the Senate, it was too much to bear, it was too much to stay home. Her decoys took shifts going for her. She often cried herself to sleep, only ate when told, Padmé felt as if her heart had been torn to shreds and had been burned. But she had to leave that day, it was Anakin's funeral. She found the nicest clothing that sh

Ahsoka's Forbidden Love Epilogue

Epilogue

Ahsoka smiled looking in the mirror, she adjusted her position to get a full view of her gown. "You look perfect," Padmé said at Ahsoka's side.
"Think he'll like it?" Ahsoka asked.
"Ahsoka, he'll love it! Of course to him the dress won't matter it's who's in the dress is what matters." Ahsoka smiled and nodded. Ahsoka heard laughing and saw Leia running to her Mother, Padmé kneeled down and Leia jumped into her arms saying something too fast for Ahsoka to understand. "Your hair looks lovely," Padmé said standing up Leia in her arms. "Just how you asked Mother to do it." Leia smiled and jumped down and ran back outs

Shattered-Chapter 4

School hadn't been the same since that day. Hunter was a little more social, but not with me. He made some friends in teh semi-popular group. Atleast he made friends. Amsil transfered schools, well transfered countries. She lives in Iceland now. Aryl has been in Flordia for the past three months, and I've been here. I started to talk to this new girl, Jennifer. She's nice, kind of awkward, but nice. Short blond hair and brown eyes. It looked nice on her. I only saw her in the afternoon so most of the time I was alone at school. It wasn't all bad, it gave me a chance to read more-learn about life-no it sucked. It sucked alot. I'm already home alone, I don't wanna be alone at school aswell. Sometimes I'm tempted to go talk to Hunter, but I decided his friends weren't my favorite people in the world.
It wasn't a big deal.
Well, sometimes it wasn't. At other times I wanted to grab Hunte

Shattered-Chapter 3

"Why the heck were you outside of the school?" He growled. his eyes were sharp enough to stab through me. "Why were you following me?" I curted. His eyes became more narrow as he stepped toward me. "It's my job."
"Your job?" I was almost sarcastic.
He wasn't amused. So I continued. "What do you mean 'your job?'? Who are you? I have never seen you around me-except when you made me drop my things."
"You never saw me because you are oblivious. I have been watching you since you were ten. But that thing that has been following you-has been for your whole life."
Was he-ranting?
"So? That doesn't answer my question. Who are you and why are you following me?"
My fist formed a ball. He sat on the dirt and hung his head. "I'm your Guardian. My name is Hunter Travison. The thing that has been after you, her name is Child. She wants you de

Shattered-Chapter 1

Every morning in my apartment was pretty much the same. Get up, Get ready for schhol, work hard, come home. I had been doing that same cycle since middle school. I felt more like a zombie then anything, but it was there to do. I ate a quick bowl of cereal and grabbed my book bag. Before I left, I paid my respects to my parents. A small table set with a picture of both of my parents with a few insence and flowers. My mother looking so young and beautiful. And then my father, still strong and handsome. I smiled and headed out the door. My apartment complex is pretty small, somewhat covered by trees. The weather was always musky and damp. I hated it. But at times it was refreshing. School wasn't any better. It looked more like a run down prision more than anything. The extirior was mainly gray with small vines rotting to the building. The smell of smoke and morning mist filled the empty ences. The fall breeze burne

.:{Shattered}:.-Prolouge I was never really one to believe in magic or other worlds. I just stepped aside from fairytales. I never got into the thought of the supernatural. It was all so fake to me. Nothing to waste my breath on. My parents saw it as growing up before the others.
But then…
They died. They were both reading in bed when the lights shut off and they heard a little girl scream. I heard this too; it woke me up. I presume my parents thought it was me and they came running into my room. I got out of bed and walked to the living room where I found candles lit all around the room, some tall and skinny and others short and fat. I gazed at the

JaseXJuliet-Prologue

"Come on! I know you can climb higher than that!" His small voice teased. I slightly pouted. "Not in this dress!"
It was true-I was only eight.
Every dress I wore was too long.
I tried to grab another branch, but my hand slipped, so I began to fall. Before I could let a single scream spill out if my mouth, I felt a small but firm hand. I blinked a few times then finally looked up to see him. He looked so scared.
"Don't worry! i won't drop you!" he smiled. I let him pull me up and let me sit. I sat close to him on the tree's branch.
"Are you alright?" he flustered out. At the moment my words wouldn't form, so I just nodded. He smied letting a small laugh escape from his lips. I smiled as I gently threw my hand to the back of his head almost causing him to fall. he caught his balance and laughed a little more.
I didn't mind.
When he was happy-so was I.
"Hey-Juliet? Can I asked you somethin'?"
"Of course."
"Will you visit everyday?"
He loves to ask que

Shattered-Chapter 2

After hours of Amsil crying on my couch, she finally gathered enough strength to limp home.
I was still picking up tissues full of snot and eye make up after she left. Once I finally got my house cleaned and I got ready for bed, I sat on my bed, lost in a day dream.
That was my night.
All of my nights.
The second I crawled under my sheets, I heard my front door open. I groaned loudly presuming it was Amsil trying to stay and cry some more.
"Amsil, just please go home." I got out of bed and walked down stairs and around the corner. "I know you are in mourning, but take this up with'" I cut myself off when I saw a little girl curled up to her knees on my floor crying for help.
Did I know her?
I got down to her level and ran my hand over her hot pink hair.
"Where's my mummy? I need to find my mother." She weeped. I couldn't h

JaseXJuliet-Chapter 1*Ten years Later*

If I had a piece of copper for every time I've put this stupid book on my head, I'd be able to make another kingdom. They obviously haven't caught on to the fact I had perfect posture.
I shouldn't complain too much, it was probably the only exciting thing to look forward to each day-besides being by the stream in the garden.
I didn't have any friends-besides my maids. I was locked up in my room 99% of the time.
Yeah-this is the royal life. And I hated it.
But at times someone did 'accidently' get soaked by water when i was around-but then I got introuble-so its a win lose kinda thing. My parents (more like my dad) didn't have a funny bone in them.
My Mother was ways playing something and my Father was always filling out some sort of form of paperwork.
We went through a lot of ink.
I always had some kind of knight watching me (something about always

How to annoy Ahsoka Tano 1. CHow to annoy Ahsoka Tano

1. Continuously pull on her lekku
2. Walk in when she's talking to Anakin and tell her 'Oh Ahsoka just thought you should know but Lux got a girlfriend!' and walk out again.
3. Ask her if she used an excessive amount of fake tan to become that orange.
4. Tell her that Rex has a major crush on her.
5. Show her the clip of her and Lux kissing and make kiss gestures along with sound effects.
6. Shout 'Snips' constantly in her ear.
7. Ask her to keep count of how many times she's been electrocuted, captured etc.
8. Every time she gets lectures from Anakin shout out 'FAIL!'
9. Give her a hairbrush
10. Taunt her about Ven

20 ways to annoy Anakin SkywalkerWays to annoy Anakin Skywalker

1.Call him Ani.

2.Ask him how his mother is.

3.Ask him if he's in a relationship with Padme. When he says no ask him if you can marry her.

4.When he enters the room sing out loud the imperial march.

5.Run into his room and shout out 'the sith are coming' when he looks at you tell him "whoops wrong room" and walk out.

6.Ask if he wants a manicure on his right hand.

7.Tell him that Obi Wan will never marry him.

8.Cover his room with love hearts, love letters etc and tell him there're from Ahsoka.

9.Tell him Ahsoka has a crush on him.

10.Ask him what he does with his mother on mother's day.

11.Whenever h

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by *Gwen-of-Gallifrey, Nov 25, 2012, 1:52:21 AM
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Shield Director Nick Fury looked up at the holographic video screen reflecting the scene that had just occurred the night before. What was this? Who was this? Nick Fury was watching a masked man, swing across Manhattan stopping a massive lizard that had attacked New York City. The man wore a skin tight red and blue suit with a mask to go with it, on the chest and back of the suit, there was the iconic image of the Spider. Everyone had called him, Spider-Man. Who was this… Spider-Man? No one really knew much about him, only what they saw.
Nick Fury continued to watch the video of the chaos of the night before; he studied the masked man as closely as he could to find a clue of who he could be, but there was nothing. Spider-Man could become a great ally to Shield, though a newbie, he knew what he was doing, and he did his job well. He looked like he could be an Avenger, but the Avengers were gone. They had gone their separate ways, they had saved the world. But if something where happen to again, could Spider-Man join the ranks of the Avengers?
Shield Agent Maria Hill walked in, she walked to Nick Fury’s side and stood there. “We may have found a lead to Spider-Man,” Agent Hill said. Nick Fury looked down at her, eager to hear. “Some of the Agents have some valuable information that might lead us to him; they’d like to speak with you.” Nick Fury, looking back at the screen portraying Spider-Man, nodded. Agent Hill left, Nick Fury watched the screen or a moment longer, then turned around to unlock the secrets of Spider-Man.

The Spectacular Avengers - Previewby *Gwen-of-Gallifrey

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**EDIT**

Some of the critiques encouraged me to edit this so I did.

Thanks for the help critiques!

This is a little preview of a fan fic I'm writing about The Avengers, and Spider-Man joining. I know, he is an Avenger in the comics, but not the movies, yet. (I hope he becomes one!) And so based off JUST the movies and a little of what I know about the comics, I've decided to write this fic.

Not entirely sure of what to do, but, that's the fun of it!

Yes, I don't know my comics like I'd like, my local Comic Book store doesn't have that much for me to get started, I was there yesterday. (Well, 2 days ago since it's 1:45 AM). But, I've put Spidey, Captain America, and Thor comics onto my Christmas list (The classic ones). Hope I get at least The Amazing Spider-Man comics! But this is a Fan Fiction, an AU, so I can play around with things.

~~I know my Star Wars characters much better, they don't have 50 universes but I'll learn the characters more!~~

If you have any better title ideas, please let me know!

Please enjoy!! If you have suggestions, fell free to throw em' my way.

Please don't tell me how uncomic like or cannon this is . . . I know, it's pry very uncannon . . . this is a Fan Fic AU!! But I'm going to enjoy it, and my few comics that I bought yesterday.

Again, please enjoy!

~~Need to go to bed, it's almost 2 AM and I need to be up about . . . 9:45 . . .~~

Critique by ~jinx-lin Dec 3, 2012, 7:47:09 AM

I think you've got a really interesting start thus far and I'm curious as to where you might take this.

The only thing I might recommend is perhaps using a few different pronouns when addressing each different character -i.e. maybe not using the name 'Spider-Man' as often. Although I completely understand what you're going for here, it gets kind of monotonous.

I'd also like to make a quick note and add that it should say 'Fury,' not 'Furry' when you're talking about Nick.

(Shield is also an acronym and should perhaps be written as S.H.I.E.L.D. I understand that that may be a bit of a pain to write repeatedly and I don't quite recall how official Marvel authors write it, but I suppose that's really just a personal preference of mine.)

All in all I still think you've got a great start here.

What do you think?

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Critique by *Lady-Anakin Nov 25, 2012, 2:03:04 PM

A very strong start! I think it was a great idea to start off with Nick Furry watching Spider-Man, tying him into the movie like how if Sony didn't make the movie but Marvel Studios did...I think this is how they would have tied Nick Furry into it like how he is in the other Marvel movies.

It's best not to worry about cannon with the Marvel universe at all. There are so many story lines and ever the characters change quite a lot. Peter's personalities changed depending on who wrote the comic and such, even the Avenger's line up changes, depending on who wrote the comic.

So focusing on just the movies and what you know of the characters in the movies will be the best thing for you.

I'm excited to read more!